Monday, 22 March 2010

Composition Changes

Changed the composition for the view from the apartment building. A few things need some further changes to make the layout complete.

A. The crane made smaller in the background, now part of the cityscape in the distance. Less of a distraction.

B. The buildings are now on hills in the background and give the impression of a horizon line or higher ground. Ferhan's other building (out of shot) will be moved to create greater depth to the middle ground.

C. Gas station may need a signpost.

D. Billboards require artwork and adverts.

E. The targets apartment is now the last one to the left, on the ground floor. This is just easier in terms of creating a stable composition and shot framing.

F. A motel sign needs to be placed outside. Just behind the telephone pole.

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